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Location: United Kingdom
I AM listening, just need telling twice...
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This does actually remind me of the original GTA. Not sure what that says about the song XD But this song is a lot different from your other songs. Other than that I believe you did a good job on this one.
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Author's Response:
Aye I can imagine mowing over innocent civilians in a speedy car with this on the radio - In the GTA universe, anyway.
This is probably the last thing anyone would play on a real car radio, sadly ;/
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I can see this going somewhere... along to your own personal taste I will suggest a few things...
1) at about 13seconds on maybe the guitar could have a few extra notes added in?
2) at about 1:06 you may think about taking the drums out and letting a little 'ambient' side to the tune flow. Like maybe add in a synth/pad/strings to help it along.
3)Both these being said, I would still see it more for like... a practice level or tutorial wether you added anything to it or not.
Hope that was some what.. helpful and not annoying. Just a few ideas to bash around incase you think you CAN finish the song. =D
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Author's Response:
It's been scrapped a long time ago (All the music I've submitted was made years ago).
So it won't see a revamp - But I thought maybe someone might find a use for it ^^
Thanks for the comments and rating on my submissions.
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DUUUUUDE reminds me of one of my old games called 'LEGO rock raiders'. That aside I can tell you that you've done a good job again =D
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This is pretty much like your other song 'creep' as in it does the same job so there isn't much new I can say about this one =P
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For what you were trying to make it seems to fit the picture perfectly fine. This is providing your game was a sort of.. space fun(in a sort of childs way) kinda game... like a funny little pong game I used to have where you could go to different arenas and different styles of play. Good job though mate.
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Author's Response:
Funny you should say that, considering MehPong - Planetarion (The game in question) is infact a RPG / Arcade style 'Breakout' remake.
If you'd like a general idea, I submitted a YouTube tribute to it a while ago - Search for "MehPong" and it should pop up, if you'd like to see what I mean.
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this is very different from your other songs XD I'll cut you some slack though as this appears to be your second song you ever made so I'm sure you know where your problems are on this one =)
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my only problem really with this song is that it is a lot quieter than other songs. Disrupts someone's flow if they have this song on a playlist if you know what I mean. Other than that it was a nice rock/ambient sort of song =)
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I'm liking this song.. but with one problem. The volume (as you mentioned) has made it distort the sounds ALOT T_T it's a shame...
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Reminds me of The Sims slightly XD but that aside I like this song, it does exactly what you seem to have tried to put across. Good work!
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*fav'd*
Author's Response:
Thanks to added me to favorite!!
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I have to disagree with the guy below... reverbs and delays (whilst being nice) can make your song a nightmare. I am actually a fan of proper sounding pianos as you have them here in this song. And for the record, I like your song =)
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Author's Response:
Thanks man! I just wanted to make the song some effects, but damn it wasn't good!
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